Question

從南京“彭宇案”開(kāi)始，社會(huì)就陷入“助人恐懼”中。最近，你班就“是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人”展開(kāi)了討論， 同學(xué)們就這一話題意見(jiàn)不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的討論結(jié)果，以“Should we help strangers?”為題寫一篇短文。

觀點(diǎn)	原因
贊成	1．幫助他人是美德 …… 2．幫助他人就是幫助自己…… ……
反對(duì)	怕陷入麻煩，甚至危險(xiǎn) 怕被誤解  ……
你的觀點(diǎn)（至少兩點(diǎn)）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；             2. 開(kāi)頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮 

參考詞匯: 美德virtue

                      Should we help strangers?

  We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping strangers. Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Should we help strangers?

      We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping strangers. Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Opinions are divided on this topic.

      Some think we should try to help others whether they are strangers or not. Helping others is a virtue, and it will make our society more harmonious. Besides, to some extent, helping others is helping oneself. We may come across some trouble and need others’ help some day. If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them, it’s hard to imagine what our world will be like.

      However, others are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger. Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness.

      In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves to avoid getting into trouble. Only if everyone tries a little kindness, will society be full of love and trust be established between people.

【解析】

試題分析：考察正反觀點(diǎn)議論文。討論的話題是“是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人”，有正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)。本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注 意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見(jiàn)時(shí)使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語(yǔ)如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：本文中的高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)還是較多的，如whether they are strangers or not.中的whether…or not

Only if everyone tries a little kindness, will society be full of love and trust be established between people.中的倒裝句。Opinions are divided on this topic.以及n need of這個(gè)短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用也較好。同時(shí)連接詞的使用很到位，如However，  In my opinion等。

考點(diǎn)：考察正反觀點(diǎn)議論文