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15．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
Dear sir，
    I'm glad to recommend （推薦） to you my friend Li Ming．
Li Ming was born on July 15，in 1974 in Beijing．（71）去掉第一個inHe graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986．（72）正確When he was in the middle school，he did good in maths，（73）good改為wellphysics and chemistry and fond of art．After graduating�。�74）fond前加wasfrom No.4 High School，he entered into Beijing（75）去掉intoUniversity study physics．After four years of hard�。�76）study前加towork there，he went to the United States for farther（77）farther改為furtherstudy．Because of his excellent work，he get a doctor's （78）get改為gotdegree in physics this year．He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our（79）but改為andountry．I should be most grateful you would
favorably consider my recommendation．Looking forward to receive your early reply　　（80）receive改為receiving
Yours truly，
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 文章是一封推薦信，推薦優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生李明，介紹李明的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，說明他是很優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生．想為祖國做出貢獻(xiàn)．

解答 Dear sir，
    I'm glad to recommend （推薦） to you my friend Li Ming．
Li Ming was born on July 15，in 1974 in Beijing．（71）He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986．（72）When he was in the middle school，he did good in maths，（73）physics and chemistry and∧fond of art．After graduating�。�74）from No.4 High School，he entered into Beijing（75）University∧study physics．After four years of hard　（76）work there，he went to the United States for farther（77）study．Because of his excellent work，he get a doctor's （78）degree in physics this year．He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our（79）country．I should be most grateful you would
favorably consider my recommendation．Looking forward to receive your early reply　�。�80）
Yours truly，
Wang Lin．
詳解：
71．去掉in 考查介詞．時間狀語是年、月、日的只需用一個介詞；但若是年、月、日、時的，則要用at six thirty，on the morning of May 4th，2001．
72．正確．
73．good改為well 考查固定搭配．be good at，do well in意為"在…學(xué)得很好"，是固定搭配．．
74．加was 考查固定搭配．fond是形容詞，and引導(dǎo)并列謂語結(jié)構(gòu)，用詞組was fond of，意為"喜歡"．
75．去掉into 考查詞語用法．動詞enter是及物動詞，直接接賓語．
76．加to  考查動詞不定式．此處用不定式短語作目的狀語．
77．farther改為further 考查副詞．farther意為"更遠(yuǎn)的"，表示實際距離；further意為"深遠(yuǎn)的，進(jìn)一步的"，指抽象概念，這里為"深造學(xué)習(xí)"，應(yīng)用further study．
78．get改為got 考查動詞時態(tài)．"獲得"這個動作已發(fā)生，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
79．but改為and 考查連詞．根據(jù)上下文邏輯，前后兩分句為并列遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．
80．receive改為receiving 考查動名詞．to是介詞，后接動詞時要用動名詞形式．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．