Question

3．請介紹一節(jié)你曾經(jīng)上過，也是你最喜歡的體育課，并說說你的理由．你的作文必須包括以下內(nèi)容：（文中不能提及你的真實姓名和學校）簡要介紹這節(jié)體育課的情況你喜歡這節(jié)課的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
That afternoon we had a P．E lesson，which I regarded as my favourite lesson．那天下午的課，是我最喜歡的課．
句型二：So every time I have difficulty in my study or life，that unforgettable lesson always reminds me how to persevere．因此每次我在學習或者生活上遇到困難的時候，那節(jié)讓人難忘的課會提醒我該如何堅持下去．
句型一 which I regarded as my favourite lesson 該句是一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中充當賓語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞 lesson
句型二 every time I have difficulty in my study or life..該句是一個由every time 這個名詞短語充當連詞的時間狀語從句，且句子謂語部分使用了重要短語：have difficulty in doing sth 做某事有困難

解答 That afternoon we had a P．E lesson，which I regarded as my favourite lesson．（高分句型一）Our teacher taught us the long jump．When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground．After warming-up exercise，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it．Then we followed the teacher and practiced one after another．Soon came my turn，but I felt a bit nevous．Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose heart．I kept on practicing．At last I was able to jump over 2 meters．（介紹課程）
   From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance．So every time I have difficulty in my study or life，that unforgettable lesson always reminds me how to persevere．（高分句型二）Then I would feel better and focus on my study again．（說明原因）

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，考生在平時應注意積累相應的詞匯和短語，在寫作時運用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文闡述清楚．