Question

10．假定你叫李華，你的美國筆友John來信告訴你他想在上海迪斯尼樂園（Disneyland）開放的第一天去參觀．請(qǐng)你給他寫封回信，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．誠摯邀請(qǐng)；
2．接機(jī)事宜；
3．住宿安排；
4．行程規(guī)劃．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好．
Dear John，
I'm so pleased to receive your last letter．
                                     
I'm looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱展開敘述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)為主．內(nèi)容包括四部分：一誠摯邀請(qǐng)；二接機(jī)事宜；三住宿安排；四 日程安排．
高分句型：
1．I suppose that（引導(dǎo)賓語從句） the Disneyland in Shanghai will attract thousands of visitors from home and abroad on its first opening day．
我認(rèn)為，在開園第一天，上海迪士尼會(huì)吸引來自國內(nèi)外數(shù)千個(gè)參觀者．
2．So before your leaving for Shanghai（非謂語動(dòng)詞做狀語），remember to tell me your flight number and the date，and （連接并列句）I will go to the airport to meet you personally
在你來上海之前，記住要告知我你的航班號(hào)和日期，我會(huì)親自到機(jī)場(chǎng)接你．

解答 Dear John，
I'm so pleased to receive your last letter．You are welcome to come to my hometown and visit Shanghai Disneyland when it is first open to the public（誠摯邀請(qǐng)）．I suppose that the Disneyland in Shanghai will attract thousands of visitors from home and abroad on its first opening day（高分句型一）．So before your leaving for Shanghai，remember to tell me your flight number and the date，and I will go to the airport to meet you personally（高分句型二）（接機(jī)事宜）．I will put you up in my family，for both my parents want to chat with you．After arriving，you can have a good rest at my home（住宿安排）．Then I will show you around some places of interest in Shanghai．I have booked the tickets online in advance，so there is no hurry（日程安排）．
I'm looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫作時(shí)，要避免重復(fù)用詞，所以我們要注意總結(jié)一下同義詞和近義詞，例如turn up=appear（出現(xiàn)）；support=raise （養(yǎng)活）．