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4．假定你是李華，你原本和Peter約好一起去觀看一場(chǎng)足球比賽，但是昨天下午你突然接到母親的電話說(shuō)她要來(lái)看你，結(jié)果你沒(méi)能按時(shí)赴約．為此你感到十分抱歉．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Peter寫一封信，以表歉意．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．表達(dá)歉意； 2．解釋沒(méi)能去的原因； 3．希望下周三邀請(qǐng)Peter吃飯作為補(bǔ)償．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）I am extremely sorry for not going to watch the football game together with you yesterday afternoon．Please accept my sincere apology．Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二）You know I hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her．So I had to cancel the appointment with you．
In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）It will be my treat．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours'
LiHua

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求我們先總述事情，即沒(méi)能和他一起去看球賽，然后再根據(jù)提示依次來(lái)寫．首先表達(dá)歉意時(shí)我們常用：I am sorry for…；accept my sincere apology等．
然后再詳細(xì)介紹沒(méi)去的原因：昨天下午突然接到母親的電話說(shuō)她要來(lái) received my mother's call，she would come for a visit，hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her等．最后提出下周三請(qǐng)客作為補(bǔ)償，可以用In order to make up for it，be my treat等．最后在寫信件結(jié)尾-盼著你的回信I'm looking forward to your reply．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）
Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二
  In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）I am extremely sorry for not going to watch the football game together with you yesterday afternoon．Please accept my sincere apology．Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二）You know I hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her．So I had to cancel the appointment with you．
     In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）It will be my treat．
     I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．