Question

為某英語雜志寫一篇簡介中國農(nóng)業(yè)概況的短文。字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下。在要點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充。 1.中國用很少的土地養(yǎng)活了眾多人口。種了占世界三分之一以上的莊稼。

2.中國科學(xué)家一直在努力發(fā)展農(nóng)業(yè)。擁有超級雜交水稻和高產(chǎn)玉米。

3.發(fā)展農(nóng)業(yè)，也注重保護(hù)環(huán)境和資源的循環(huán)利用。

生詞提示

farmland耕地;irrigated area灌溉面積；resource資源;environment環(huán)境;recycle/reuse循環(huán)利用；organic farming有機(jī)農(nóng)業(yè) 

寫作支招

一) 寫作定性

本文為概括介紹性的說明文。要求語言簡潔，條理清晰，敘述客觀。時態(tài)主要為現(xiàn)在時。句-f多為陳述句。按要求文章分三到四段為宜。二) 難點(diǎn)突破

1.可用詞匯

effective,agriculture, development, feed,irrigate, farmland, struggle, work on,have/ has been doing，search for，super-hybrid rice，high output corn, environmental-friendly，fertil?izer,avoid damaging to

2.結(jié)構(gòu)模仿

肯定成績或成就：運(yùn)用wonder,make it possible to和with結(jié)構(gòu)使句子更精煉地道。It is a wonder for them to make it possible to complete the building in just three years with?out any modern tools.

尋找解決問題的辦法：用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時更能體現(xiàn)不斷努力，一直堅(jiān)持的精神，用with/ without doing結(jié)構(gòu)和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)使語言簡潔。

The local government has been looking for ways to develop tourism without doing harm to the environment.

Using the newly-developed technique, these factories are making twice as many products as before.

描述后果和成效:運(yùn)用not only...but also的倒裝句型使句子緊湊。Not only can the farmers in the villages be provided with more firewood but also the forests play an important role in keeping the soil from being washed away by heavy rains.

3.參考句型

Sb. has been doing sth.某人一直在做某事make it possible to do使做某事成為可能

twice as much/many as是.... 的兩倍

pay much attention to sth. /doing sth.更多關(guān)注做某事keep...free from doing sth.使..... 不做某事

Answer 1

Agriculture inChina

It is a wonder for China to make it possible to feed 22% of the world' population with the only 7% of the world's farmland.Chinahas the largest irrigated area of the farm land in the world and grows more than a third of rice and other crops of the world.

Chinese scientists, such as Yuan Longping, have been searching for ways to increase grain har?vests without expanding the area of the fields.

Using hybrid rice and high output corn which were invented by Chinese scientists,farmers are producing harvest twice as large as before.

Not only doesChinadevelop its high output agriculture but also it pays much attention to keep?ing the environment free from being damaged. Nowadays China is developing green environmen?tally-friendly farming，advocating recycling of re?sources and waste in agriculture. This method can make the environment around us clean and safe.