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8．假定你是李華．下面的圖畫(huà)描述了教師節(jié)那天你們班組織的一次活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作藥店并參考圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，為校刊"英語(yǔ)角"版面寫(xiě)一篇短文．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．活動(dòng)的策劃； 2．教室的布置；
3．活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容； 4．你的感想．
注意：
1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可根據(jù)情況增減細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)；
4．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
class=mathjye-underline＞Ms．Li，our English teacher，must have found it strange on Teachers'Day； she did not receive a single greeting card from us students．She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her．As Teachers'Day wasapproaching，our class decided to hold a party tocelebrate the important day for a change this year．On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowersand balloons，and others went to buy cakes，drinks and fruits．Theblackboard was decorated with beautiful words，which read"HappyTeachers'Day!"
Entering the classroom，Ms．Li wassurprised to find we were standing in line，clappinghands and saying loudly"Happy Teachers'Day!"Wang Hua，our monitor，presentedher with the prepared flowers．Some of the girls sang songs for Ms．Li，and three boys showed their Gongfu talent．Before we left，we enjoyeda new English song by Ms．Li．
Ms．Li spent a wonderful time with us，but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all herhard work and guidance．．

Answer 1

分析 本文既是提綱作文又是圖畫(huà)作文，根據(jù)所提供的一幅圖和所給要點(diǎn)信息描述教師節(jié)班級(jí)組織的一次活動(dòng)．要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)的策劃；教室的布置；活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；你的感想．寫(xiě)作時(shí)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：waitfor sb （等待某人），celebrate sth （慶�！�），was decorated with （用…裝飾…），presented sb with sth（贈(zèng)與，授予），spenda wonderful time（度過(guò)美好的時(shí)光），standin line （排隊(duì)站著），clap hands（鼓掌）．

解答 Ms．Li，our Englishteacher，must have found it strange on Teachers'Day； she did not receive a single greeting card from usstudents．She would have never thought a completesurprise was waiting for her．（開(kāi)頭）
As Teachers'Day wasapproaching，our class decided to hold a party tocelebrate the important day for a change this year．（活動(dòng)的策劃）On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowersand balloons，and others went to buy cakes，drinks and fruits．Theblackboard was decorated with beautiful words，which read"HappyTeachers'Day!"（教室的布置）
Entering the classroom，Ms．Li wassurprised to find we were standing in line，clappinghands and saying loudly"Happy Teachers'Day!"Wang Hua，our monitor，presentedher with the prepared flowers．Some of thegirls sang songs for Ms．Li，and three boys showed their Gongfu talent．Before we left，we enjoyeda new English song by Ms．Li．（活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容）
Ms．Li spent a wonderful time with us，but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all herhard work and guidance．（感想） 
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．（結(jié)尾---總結(jié)概括）

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