Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.

When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!” was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got downstairs just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first, their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.

Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had forgotten my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)都為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

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Answer 1

【答案】I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.

Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passes it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read “We will never forget you. Merry Christmas!” Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight. I was moved with tears.

【解析】書面表達(dá)題考察的是英語(yǔ)各方面的應(yīng)用能力。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉與相關(guān)擴(kuò)展，應(yīng)該注意高級(jí)和固定句型的使用，尤其文章的開始和結(jié)尾，人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。

本文是一篇記敘文，先寫了自己很多年因?yàn)楣ぷ髟�因沒有回家陪家人過圣誕節(jié)，自己感覺到傷心，但是今年很幸運(yùn)有機(jī)會(huì)陪家人一起過，自己收到了家人的禮物，并且家人沒有責(zé)怪自己因?yàn)楣ぷ鞫鴽]有陪他們過圣誕節(jié)。

文章亮點(diǎn)：首先作者提煉要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)確，并且文章多處使用定語(yǔ)從句和固定句型等；

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1.I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face.本句比較復(fù)雜，有whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

2. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus.

She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes.

I opened it and saw a letter which read “We will never forget you.文章多次使用定語(yǔ)從句。