Question

15．假設(shè)你是某中學學生會主席李華，你從報紙上得知英國人Smith 先生騎自行車從英國抵達北京，創(chuàng)下了新的世界紀錄．請你用英文給他寫一封郵件，向他表示祝賀，并代表學生會邀請他于近期到你校做一次演講．
內(nèi)容包括：
（1）說明邀請他的原因
（2）告知演講的相關(guān)信息（例如：時間、地點、聽眾等）
（3）詢問對方是否前來
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I am Li Hua，the president of the Student Union at a Middle School．On behalf of our school，I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced because you are very popular in our school and your stories published in the newspapers are a great source of encouragement to many people．（高分句型二）
The activity will be held in our school hall on November 17th．It will start from 15：30 and last for 2 hours．The audience may include all the students，staff and some parents．We really hope you can come to make it．
If you are interested in this，please write back to me at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）I am looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息從報紙上得知英國人Smith 先生騎自行車從英國抵達北京，創(chuàng)下了新的世界紀錄．請你用英文給他寫一封郵件，向他表示祝賀，并代表學生會邀請他于近期到你校做一次演講，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）說明邀請他的原因
（2）告知演講的相關(guān)信息（例如：時間、地點、聽眾等）（3）詢問對方是否前來 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：On behalf of代表；Meanwhile同時；give a speech做演講；are interested in對…感興趣；look forward to盼望；congratulate sb on 祝賀某人
On behalf of our school，I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set．（高分句型一）
Meanwhile，I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced because you are very popular in our school and your stories published in the newspapers are a great source of encouragement to many people．（高分句型二）
If you are interested in this，please write back to me at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      I am Li Hua，the president of the Student Union at a  Middle School．On behalf of our school，I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced because you are very popular in our school and your stories published in the newspapers are a great source of encouragement to many people．（高分句型二）
      The activity will be held in our school hall on November 17th．It will start from 15：30 and last for 2 hours．The audience may include all the students，staff and some parents．We really hope you can come to make it．
      If you are interested in this，please write back to me at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）I am looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Sincerely Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．