Question

【題目】假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Jenny,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my pare-time job this summer vacation, in that I worked as a guide in a travel agency.

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ve never waste money and learn to share worries with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful or valuable summer vacation.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in that---in which

【2】tired---tiring

【3】have---had

【4】把support for中的for去掉

【5】ask---asking

【6】parent---parents

【7】worse---more

【8】在something后加that

【9】把the wonderful中的the改成a

【10】or---and

【解析】

【1】in that---in which 考查非限制性定語從句，介詞后面的關(guān)系代詞，指人時用whom，指物時用which，故把in that---in which。

【2】tired---tiring 此處物做主語，句意是：工作有趣但令人厭煩。Tired感到厭煩的；tiring令人厭煩的，故把tired---tiring。

【3】have---had 在此復(fù)合句中主句的時態(tài)是一般過去時態(tài)，故后面從句的時態(tài)用過去完成時態(tài)，所以把have---had。

【4】把support for中的for去掉 在此句中support養(yǎng)育，是及物動詞，故把support for中的for去掉。

【5】ask---asking 固定搭配keep on doing持續(xù)不斷地做某事，故把ask---asking。

【6】parent---parents 此處表達的意思是：和我的父母分享擔憂，故把parent---parents。

【7】worse---more 根據(jù)上下文可知此處表達的意思是：另外，此外。故把worse---more。

【8】在something后加that 在此句中something是先行詞，定語從句中缺引導(dǎo)詞，缺主語，故在something后加that。

【9】把the wonderful中的the改成a 此處表達的意思是：我有一個精彩的、有價值的暑假。故把the wonderful中的the改成a。

【10】or---and 此處wonderful和valuable是并列關(guān)系，故把or---and。