Question

11．The suitable clothes can make men handsome and make women attractive，so more and more people spend much money on clothes．
Thanks to the fashion designers，many different styles of clothes appear every day．If you go to a big store or walk on the street，you'll find many fashionable clothes easily．
Of course everyone has his or her own way of dressing．Perhaps the most popular clothes are casual ones．They're made of cotton and there are many types of designs．They feel comfortable，so men and women as well as the young and the old enjoy wearing them．Some casual clothes don't need dry-cleaning，so they can save us money．
Not everyone can wear casual clothes at any time and any place．Some people have to wear uniforms when they're at work such as police officers，soldiers，firefighters and pilots．Uniforms can not only protect them but also show good discipline．
It doesn't matter what kinds of clothes you wear．It's important for everyone to dress neatly and suitable （合適地）．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)．
2．以約120個(gè)詞就我們現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中衣著的話題談你的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你個(gè)人對(duì)待衣著重要性的理解；
（2）舉例說明你對(duì)衣服潮流（fashion）的看法；
（3）你怎樣看待身邊部分同學(xué)對(duì)名牌服裝的追求．
【寫作要求】
1．可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 寫作主題：我們現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中衣著
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)．
2．以約120個(gè)詞就我們現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中衣著的話題談你的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你個(gè)人對(duì)待衣著重要性的理解；
（2）舉例說明你對(duì)衣服潮流（fashion）的看法；
（3）你怎樣看待身邊部分同學(xué)對(duì)名牌服裝的追求．

解答 This passage tells us that though people dress differently in everyday life，what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion．
Personally speaking，I totally agree with the writer．It is obvious that we should not dress too casually．It is necessary for every one of us to dress properly on different occasions．In schools，students are often required to wear school uniforms，but when they are out of school，they should not care too much about what to wear．I have friends who only buy and wear clothes of famous brands and never think about their high prices．Some young people are always trying to keep up with the fashion and also care too much about their dressing．I think it is not worthwhile．
In a word，as students in schools，it is always important that we dress neatly and properly every day．We should also remember to pay more attention to our studies．

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