Question

18．在生活中，人與人之間難免會發(fā)生不愉快的事情，其中有誤會，有矛盾，有爭吵…請就此寫一篇英語短文．
主要內容包括：1）事情的經(jīng)過及其處理；    2）你的感想．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)不少于120個；
2、不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們就"人與人之間難免會發(fā)生不愉快"寫一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，內容要點包括：事情的經(jīng)過及其處理； 你的感想．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為事情的經(jīng)過．第二部分為事情的處理過程．第三部分為作者的感想．
重點短語與句型：
turn into 負擔…
To be honest 熬夜 
be to blame 另一方面
as a matter of fact充分利用
高分句型一：Hua and Li Jiang，who are good friends，bumped into each other，trying to catch the ball．此句用了who引導的定語從句以及現(xiàn)在分詞trying作原因狀語
高分句型二：It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society此句用it 作形式主語，真正主語是后面的不定式．

解答 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life．During the basketball game yesterday afternoon，Su Hua and Li Jiang，who are good friends，bumped into each other，trying to catch the ball．（高分句型一）Then they started shouting and yelling，and it turned into a horrible quarrel．（事情的經(jīng)過）
　　To be honest，it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things．They cared too much about winning and losing．As a matter of fact，blocking，pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game．Fortunately，after the head teacher's instruction，they forgave each other very soon and became good friends again．（事情的處理過程）
　　In my opinion，to avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another．It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society．（高分句型二）Instead of blaming each other，we should communicate more and put ourselves in others'place．Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate．We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely．（作者的感想）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．