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【題目】食物浪費(fèi)是全世界一個(gè)嚴(yán)肅的問題。為此，開始于去年1月的光盤行動(dòng)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上呼吁人們減少食物浪費(fèi)。下面請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的材料，以 “How to reduce food waste”為題，寫一篇80詞的短文，并提出你的看法或者建議。

1．在餐館不要點(diǎn)太多的食物；

2．如果你不能吃完所點(diǎn)的食物，那就把剩余的帶回家；

3．對(duì)食物不要太挑剔，一些食物也許嘗起來不怎么，但你的身體需要；

4．留意家里的食物，不要買的太多，特別是蔬菜和水果；

注意：1．文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，保持連貫；

3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校。

參考詞匯：reduce減少； rest 剩余的； picky 挑剔的; keep an eye on 注意、留意。

How to reduce food waste

Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January last year. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.

Do not order too much in a restaurant. Only order as much as you want to eat. If you cannot eat all the food you ordered, take the rest of it home. Don’t be too picky about food. Some food may not taste great, but your body needs it. Keep an eye on what food you have at home. Don’t buy too much, especially vegetables and fruit. To reduce food waste is a big task, and it needs time. It’s important that everyone must save food and reduce food waste from now on.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的主題是How to reduce food waste，本文貼近自己的生活，比較有話說。對(duì)于此類文章，要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1、首先，最好要要根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際生活經(jīng)歷來寫，這樣比較能寫出真實(shí)情感；2、其次，可以多用一些連接詞來時(shí)文章順暢；3、最后，要注意點(diǎn)出文章的主題，文章的主題要與所寫內(nèi)容有關(guān)；4、注意單詞、詞組、句式的運(yùn)用來給文章增色。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫作，要善于使用不同的句型。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換。學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)也要注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，本文運(yùn)用了be too picky about對(duì)...太過挑剔，Keep an eye on注意，F(xiàn)rom now on從現(xiàn)在開始， 等短語。本文也有很多句型值得學(xué)習(xí)，如If you cannot eat all the food you ordered, take the rest of it home.假設(shè)， Keep an eye on what food you have at home賓語從句，It’s important that everyone must save food and reduce food waste from now on形式賓語。