Question

5．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）畫掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起） 不計(jì)分．
I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week．I was surprising to see great changes had been taken place in the countryside．Take my aunt's family for example．We supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have ten workers working for themselves．
Their family's income reached as much 100，000yuanlast year．Not onlydid they have a house，a car andcomputers，they can also afford a trip abroad every year．When asking what else they needed most，they said thatthey wanted to learn a few English so that they could do business withforeigners directly．To their delighted，my cousin can use that he has learntfrom university to help them with overseas trade．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中講述了上周去鄉(xiāng)下叔叔家的所見所聞，介紹了鄉(xiāng)村的巨大變化．

解答 I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week．I was surprising to see great changes had been taken place in the countryside．Take my aunt's family for example．We supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have ten workers working for themselves．
Their family's income reached as much∧100，000yuan  last year．Not only did they have a house，a car and computers，they can also afford a trip abroad every year．When asking what else they needed most，they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that they could do business with foreigners directly．To their delighted，my cousin can use that he has learnt from university to help them with overseas trade．
詳解：
1．surprising改為surprised；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞做形容詞修飾物，過去分詞做形容詞修飾人，此處修飾主語I，故用過去分詞形式．
2．去掉been；考查動詞的語態(tài)，take place意為"發(fā)生"，不能用于被動語態(tài)，故把been去掉．
3．we改為they；考查人稱代詞，分析句意可知此處的人稱代詞指代上文的 my aunt 一家，故用they．
4．themselves改為them；考查人稱代詞，分析句意為"他們還雇了十個工人為他們工作"，此處應(yīng)用them作介詞for的賓語．
5．much后面加as；考查固定搭配，as much as 是固定短語，此處表示數(shù)量，意為"多達(dá)…"．
6．did改為do；考查動詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本句講的是現(xiàn)在的一個實(shí)際情況，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故把did改為do．
7．a(chǎn)sking改為asked；考查分詞作狀語，主語they與動詞ask是動賓關(guān)系，故用過去分詞形式作狀語．
8．few改為little；考查近義詞辨析，few修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，little修飾不可數(shù)名詞，句中English為不可數(shù)名詞，故用little．
9．delighted改為delight；考查固定搭配，to one's delight是固定短語，意為"使某人高興的是"．
10．that改為what；考查名詞性從句，這是一個賓語從句，從句中動詞learnt缺少賓語，故用what作從句的賓語．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語等基礎(chǔ)知識進(jìn)一步分析各個句子，找出文中的錯誤加以修改．