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18．假如你是李華，最近你的英國筆友Nick來信，對你所在學校開設的漢語書法課很感興趣．請你根據(jù)下列要點，用英語給他寫一封回信，作一簡單的介紹．
1．開設書法課的目的；
2．書法課的開設情況；
3．你參加書法課的感受；
4．你對學校的一點希望．
參考詞匯：書法：calligraphy   課程：course
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．信的開頭與結束語已為你寫好（不計人總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Nick，
I'm glad that．
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I'm glad that you are interested in our Chinese calligraphy cousrse．我很高興你對我們的漢語書法課有興趣．
高分句型二：
Hopefully our school will provide more similar courses so that we can develop in an all-round way．
希望我們學校能夠開設更多的類似的課程，那樣的話我們可以得到全面的發(fā)展．
句型一 that you are interested in our Chinese calligraphy cousrse該句是一個由that引導的賓語從句，that在句中充當引導詞，不作句子成分． 該賓語從句的謂語部分還使用了一個固定的短語：be interested in 對…感興趣
句型二 so that we can develop in an all-round way 此處，so that后引導了一個目的狀語從句

解答 Dear Nick，
   I'm glad that you are interested in our Chinese calligraphy cousrse．（高分句型一）I hope the following will be helpful to you．
   Chinese calligraphy is part of the Chinese traditional culture．To help the students understand the art of Chinese writing，our school offers the Chinese calligraphy course this term．Every week there is one period for each class，guided by a professional teacher．It has benefited us a lot．It not only helps us to observe and do things carefully，but also enables us to learn other subjects well．（參課感受） Hopefully our school will provide more similar courses so that we can develop in an all-round way．（高分句型二）For more information，please let me know．
Best Wishes!
Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，題干里一般羅列了想要的寫作要點．考生在寫作時應注意盡量做到將寫作要點與主題緊密聯(lián)系，運用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文闡述清楚．