Question

15．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華?你的美國朋友Peter 想了解你平時使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的情況?
請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．你每周平均使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的時長；
2．你使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)做什么；
3．使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)對你學(xué)習(xí)和生活的影響?
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?
Dear Peter，
I'd love to share my experience of using the Internet with you．On average，I use the Internet 3 to 5 hours a week．Most of the time，I go online tocompleteprojects or finishhomework，which I think is the fastest way to get the information I need．（高分句型一）I also do online shopping，watch movies，chat with friends and play games in my spare time．
On one hand，I find using the Internet helpful to my studiesand it makes my life easier and more convenient．On the other hand，however，it takesup too much of my time．With so manyfun things to do online，I sometimes cannot focus on school work．（高分句型二）It is easy to get addicted to online games or chatting with friends．Therefore，spending too much time online can be a problem，too．（高分句型三）
What are your thoughts about the best way to use the Internet？Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給美國的朋友回復(fù)郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：你每周平均使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的時長；你使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)做什么；使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)對你學(xué)習(xí)和生活的影響?2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
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解答 Dear Peter，
     I'd love to share my experience of using the Internet with you．On average，I use the Internet 3 to 5 hours a week．Most of the time，I go online to complete projects or finish homework，which I think is the fastest way to get the information I need．（高分句型一）I also do online shopping，watch movies，chat with friends and play games in my spare time．
     On one hand，I find using the Internet helpful to my studies and it makes my life easier and more convenient．On the other hand，however，it takes up too much of my time．With so many fun things to do online，I sometimes cannot focus on school work．（高分句型二）It is easy to get addicted to online games or chatting with friends．Therefore，spending too much time online can be a problem，too．（高分句型三）
    What are your thoughts about the best way to use the Internet？Looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．