Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇題為SAVE EARTH, SAVE US的公益廣告解說詞。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
2．內(nèi)容要涵蓋上面所列的幾條；
3．不能逐詞翻譯。
With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.

Answer 1

With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.
Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour waste water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems.
Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise people’s awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. Only by working together can we help the environment!

解析試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些比較常見的短語as a result 作為。。的結(jié)果；pay attention to 注意；deal with處理；raise one’s awareness of ，提高。。的意識(shí)；die out滅亡；Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken.這個(gè)句子中體現(xiàn)被動(dòng)語態(tài)與情態(tài)動(dòng)詞連用。Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with.這個(gè)句子中and 連接pure與send并列；Only by working together can we help the environment這個(gè)句子體現(xiàn)的only加狀語的倒數(shù)結(jié)構(gòu)。
考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文