Question

8．假如你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知Banks夫婦的餐廳在登廣告招聘兼職服務(wù)員．請寫一封電子郵件應(yīng)聘．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．發(fā)郵件的目的；2．自我介紹；3．應(yīng)聘理由（至少兩條理由）；4．表達(dá)自己的希望．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；    2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
 3．郵件開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．﹠Mrs．Banks，
I'm Li Hua，who has just graduated from high school this summer．        ．
Regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Besides，I'm diligent and healthy with a nice character，which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds．此外，我勤奮和健康與良好的性格，這有助于我與不同背景的人相處得很好．本句是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代整個主句的內(nèi)容，在從句中做主語．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：What matters most is the opportunity of expanding my horizons as well as making more new friends．最重要的是拓展我的視野，結(jié)交更多的新朋友．本句中What matters most 是一個主語從句，what在從句中做主語．

解答 Dear Mr．﹠Mrs．Banks，
I'm Li Hua，who has just graduated from high school this summer．I know that you want some part-timers for your newly-opened restaurant on the Internet and I'd like to be part of your team．
I've been learning English for 10 years，and I can express myself fluently．Besides，I'm diligent and healthy with a nice character，which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）What matters most is the opportunity of expanding my horizons as well as making more new friends．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）And it is the sense of commitment that I am eager to raise through such a valuable experience that inspires me to make this request．
An early reply at your convenience will be much appreciated if my qualifications meet with your approval．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．