Question

12．人們結(jié)交的朋友通常有兩種：與自己志趣相似的或不同的．兩種朋友各有特點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)你以"Friends，Similar or Different？"為題，按照以下的英文提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves．Others choose friends who are similar to themselves．Compare the advantages of the two kinds of friends．Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself？Why？
注意：1．不少于120個(gè)詞，文章的題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Friends，Similar or Different？
It is very neccesary and important for everyone to have good friends．Some of our friends can be similar to us，and some of them can differ in many ways．Regardless of their similarities or differences，there are a few advantages of having such friends．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱作文，作文主題明確，即""Friends，Similar or Different？"，根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文．闡述喜歡結(jié)交哪種朋友：是與自己志趣相似的還是不同的，并說明理由．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1開頭-引出話題．； 2．好處--選擇與自己志趣相似的朋友；3．好處--選擇與自己志趣不同的朋友；4．自己的觀點(diǎn)；5．結(jié)尾-總結(jié)．
時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：be similar to（與…相似），regardless of（不管，不顧），be beneficial（有益的），in that （因?yàn)?），such as （例如），in addition（除…之外還），provide sb with sth（給某人提供某物），be different from（與…不同），of one's own（某人自己的），introduce sth to sb（介紹，某物給某人），offer sb sth（提供某人某物），as for（關(guān)于），prefer to do sth（更喜歡做某事），on a certain matter（在某個(gè)事情上）．
【高分句型一】
1．Having friends who are similar to us can be beneficial，in that we can enjoy things together，such as going to clubs or to the movies．
①此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"friends"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在定語(yǔ)從句中做主語(yǔ)．
②此處"in that"意為"因?yàn)?引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
2．In addition，having such friends can provide us with a companion to share our opinions．
此處是由動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)"having such friends"作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為"can provide"，動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ)"to share our opinions"作目的狀語(yǔ)．
【高分句型三】
3．However，having friends who are different from us would have some advantages of its own．
此處是由動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)"having such friends"作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為"can provide"，動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ)"to share our opinions"作目的狀語(yǔ)．
【高分句型四】
2．They are able to introduce new and different things to us，providing us with unexpected experiences in life．
 此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"providing us with unexpected experiences in life"作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"They are able to introduce new and different things to us"，主句的主語(yǔ)為"They"與所給動(dòng)詞"provide"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．

解答 Friends，Similar or Different？It is very necessary and important for everyone to have good friends．Some of our friends can be similar to us，and some of them can differ in many ways．Regardless of their similarities or differences，there are a few advantages of having such friends．（開頭-引出話題）
Having friends who are similar to us can be beneficial，in that we can enjoy things together，such as going to clubs or to the movies．【高分句型一】In addition，having such friends can provide us with a companion to share our opinions．【高分句型二】（好處--選擇與自己志趣相似的朋友）
However，having friends who are different from us would have some advantages of its own．【高分句型三】They are able to introduce new and different things to us，providing us with unexpected experiences in life．【高分句型四】Furthermore，they could offer us a different view on a certain matter．（好處--選擇與自己志趣不同的朋友）
As for me，I prefer to choose friends similar to myself．I feel that friendship between us will be smoother and more enjoyable．However，I never refuse a friendship offered by a friend who is different from me．（自己的觀點(diǎn)）
I think the more friends we have，the simpler our life will be!（結(jié)尾）

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