Question

7．友善是人們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中的重要部分．請�?友善"為話題寫一篇英語短文．
內(nèi)容要求：
1．你對友善的理解；
2．在日常生活中如何善待他人；
3．恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾．
注意：
①無須寫標(biāo)題，文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
②詞數(shù)不少于120詞
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As  we all know，kindness is a very important part of living．眾所周知，友善是我們生活中的非常重要的一部分．
分句型二：
Besides，it is important for us to commucicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．
除此以外，和彼此交流以及分享快樂與悲傷是非常重要的．
句型一 As  we all know，…該句是一個由as作引導(dǎo)詞，代替后面整個句子的非限制性定語從句
句型二 it is important for us to commucicate with each…該句使用了it作形式主語而將真正的主語不定式位于句尾的固定句型：It's+adj+for sb+to do sth

解答 As  we all know，kindness is a very important part of living．（高分句型一）Kindness is not something that can necessarily be paid back．It doesn't take much to be kind．A smile，a gentle look，a gentle touch on the arm，and a hug will let people know that you care about them．（說明原因）
   Stuents should learn how to be kind to others．But in what ways？First of all，we should respect others．Everybody has their own way to do things，so we should understand each other．Besides，it is important for us to commucicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．（高分句型二）What's more，we should offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．（提出要求） Then we will feel very happy．
   So why don't you try a random act of kindness？I think you'll like how you feel，and you will like the results．

點評 本書面表達為提綱類，該類書面表達要點明確，一般規(guī)定了考生的解題思路，考生因根據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)或者生活經(jīng)歷展開敘述．寫作時應(yīng)語言準(zhǔn)確，簡潔明了．