Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，目前正在英國(guó)做交換生，你的英國(guó)朋友Debbie送了你一張Ceilidh Dance舞會(huì)票�，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)給她寫(xiě)一封郵件致謝，并詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Debbie,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Debbie,

I am delighted to receive your ticket for the Ceilidh Dance. I really feel grateful for your kindness and it will surely make my cultural experience here more colorful. Here, I’d like to know some derails about this dance party.

First, could you please give me a brief introduction of this dance so I can know something about it before attending it? Besides, I’d like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I’m supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones? Finally, I’m wondering how I can get there and avoid being late.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，內(nèi)容是英國(guó)朋友Debbie送了你一張Ceilidh Dance舞會(huì)票，給她寫(xiě)一封郵件致謝，并詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。根據(jù)圖片可知，你需要向Debbie問(wèn)四方面內(nèi)容：1. 舞會(huì)的介紹；2. 所要帶的東西；3. 需要穿的衣服或鞋子；4.怎么到達(dá)那兒。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如feel grateful for，be supposed to，avoid doing，look forward to；還運(yùn)用句型：Besides, I’d like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I’m supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones?這句話運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如first，besides，finally等等。