Question

【題目】假如你是高三學生李華。你從新華網(wǎng)上得知21st Century 就我們?nèi)绾沃�配壓歲錢向大家征稿。請用英文向報社投稿，介紹你的預算。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)在100字左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭已為你寫好。不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir，

I’ve learned from www. xinhua. com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money._____________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I’ve learned from www.xinhua.com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money.

In China, it is common for us children to receive gift money during the Spring Festival. So it is important for us to put the money to good use. How I budget my gift money is as follows.

First of all, I want to buy some books to enrich myself. In addition, I will join in a summer camp, which can not only broaden my horizons but also help me get connected with others to develop the spirit of teamwork. In addition, I plan to give away some of my money to those who are in need of help.

Anyway, we should spend our gift money doing something useful and meaningful.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封投稿信件；你從新華網(wǎng)上得知21st Century 就我們?nèi)绾沃�配壓歲錢向大家征稿，于是你寫信介紹你的預算，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：the Spring Fetival （春節(jié)），budget my gift money（預算我的壓歲錢），enrich myself（豐富自己），broaden my horizons（開拓視野），do something useful and meaningful（做一些有用和有意義的事情）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如In China, it is common for us children to receive gift money during the Spring Fetival.；定語從句及not only…but also…的應用I will join in a summer camp, which can not only broaden my horizons but also help me get connected with others to develop the spirit of teamwork；In addition, I plan to give away some of my money to those who are in need of help；詞組first of all，in addition的使用，使得文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。