Question

11．慈善捐助正在我國流行開來．請用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章，就慈善捐助談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容要點如下：
1．慈善捐助對受惠人群會有哪些影響；
2．你最想加入的慈善組織是哪一類（助學(xué)、濟貧、關(guān)愛殘疾人…），理由是什么．
注意：
1．可參照以上內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Charity is becoming a popular word in China．Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system．
Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．（高分句型二）In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（高分句型三）
Given a chance for charity，I would like to work for the children in the remote areas．Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（高分句型四）Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs，helping their life to get back on track．（150 words）．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息慈善捐助正在我國流行開來．請用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章，就慈善捐助談?wù)勀愕南敕�，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：慈善捐助對受惠人群會有哪些影響；你最想加入的慈善組織是哪一類（助學(xué)、濟貧、關(guān)愛殘疾人…），理由是什么．  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：involved in 涉及，參與；Meanwhile同時；In addition另外； take responsibility for為…負責；drop out of輟學(xué)；get back回來；
Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．（高分句型一）
Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．（高分句型二）
In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（高分句型三）
Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（高分句型四）

解答 Charity is becoming a popular word in China．
      Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system．
      Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．（高分句型二）In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（高分句型三）
      Given a chance for charity，I would like to work for the children in the remote areas．Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（高分句型四）Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs，helping their life to get back on track．（150 words）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．