Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你班的外籍教師Mr. Smith 即將回國。他喜歡中國文化，所以你送他一組中國剪紙（福、壽、喜）。請(qǐng)寫一封送別信，簡介禮物寓意，并表達(dá)謝意和祝愿。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 書信的開頭和結(jié)尾以為你寫好。

參考詞匯：1.剪紙paper cuttings; 2.福 Fu；3.壽 Shou；4.喜 Xi

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

It is really hard for me to say goodbye to you. I sincerely thank you for your assistance in my study and treasure every moment we spent together on campus. Without your excellent teaching, I wouldn’t have made such great progress in English.

Since you like Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to present you a set of paper cuttings. They are not only traditional decorations but also ancient handicraft arts, which convey good moral meanings. Fu, Shou and Xi represent fortune, long-life or longevity and happiness respectively. These works are really worth collecting.

Thank you again and wish you a pleasant journey. I do hope that our friendship will last forever.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封送別信。試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫的是簡介禮物寓意，并表達(dá)謝意和祝愿。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，采用三段式，句中使用高級(jí)句子。It is really hard for me to say goodbye to you.動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語；treasure every moment we spent together on campus.省略that的定語從句用在句中；Since you like Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to present you a set of paper cuttings. since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；They are not only traditional decorations but also ancient handicraft arts, which convey good moral meanings. not only…but also結(jié)構(gòu)和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句完美結(jié)合；I do hope that our friendship will last forever.強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語的運(yùn)用堪稱經(jīng)典。