Question

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Mary,

  I am Senior 3 student. I’m going to take part in this summer’s college entrance examination. In preparation for it , I am studying every hard. As a result, I often feel exhausting both physically and mentally. Therefore, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. I know the y have great expectations for me , but I feel the pressure is too heavy for me not to cope with. I attempted to communicating with them, but failed.

  Now I quite upset about it .How can my parents understand us ? I really don’t know how to do . Could you please give me some advice?

  Looking forward to your reply. 

                                                                                  Yours

                                                                                   LiH

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 在am 和senior 加 a

 exhausting改為exhausted

 therefore 改為however

 to 改為on

  not to cope 去掉not

  communicating 改為 communicate

  I 后面加am

  us 改為me

  how 改為what

 advices 改為advice

【解析】

 在am 和senior 加 a              題意為我是一個高三的學(xué)生。缺少冠詞。

 exhausting改為exhausted           結(jié)果我身心疲憊。Be exhausted 筋疲力盡。

 therefore 改為however             然而我的父母給我了我很大的壓力，表示轉(zhuǎn)折

 to 改為on                        考查固定短語put pressure on sb 給某人施加壓力。

  not to cope 去掉not               我感覺壓力太大而不能處理。Too ….to  太。。而不能，故根本需要否定詞

  communicating 改為 communicate   考查動詞短語，attempt to do 試圖做某事

  I 后面加am                      考查短語 be upset about 對，，感到不安，缺少系動詞。

  us 改為me                       本文以第一人稱來敘述，故用me.

  how 改為what                    固定搭配 what to do 如何做。

 advices 改為advice                advice 是不可數(shù)名詞，故不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式。