Question

　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分１0分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同舊式寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Ms Smith,

I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art

exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9^th of July

in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but

high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.

As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite

For you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Ms Smith,

I am secretary of City Student Union (CSU).We were organizing an art exhibition for high school student

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in ^ city .This will be held on the 9^th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai.More

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than 1000 painting will be on show ,but high school students and teachers from all the eight

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districts will come to the event .As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school

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students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition .We would be grateful when you could join

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them that day .Looking forward to hear from you soon .

us                                  hearing

Yours,

Li Ming

解析:

1. 從上下文中可以看出，要用現(xiàn)在進行時，而非過去進行時態(tài)。

2. 這里的城市我所在的城市，當然要加定冠詞。

3. this指代是上一句中的an art exhibition，要用it.

4. painting為可數(shù)名詞，既然是1000多幅，要用復數(shù)。

5. 這里是承接上一句的意思，而非轉折。

6. be popularly with中要用形容詞，因為這里作表語，而非修飾動詞。

7. invite為及物動詞，后面不必接介詞。

8. 這里表示的是虛擬語氣，要用if.

9. 這是一份邀請函，應是加入到我們之中。

10. 在look forward to中to是介詞，后接動詞時要動名詞形式。