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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Sorry to hear that you failed in the monthly exams. As is known to us that life is not a smoothly journey, which is full of ups and downs, so never lose the heart. But there are some tips for you to follow. Firstly, learn from your experiences. It’s strongly suggested that you figured out and reflect on your mistakes. To avoid make the same errors, you may as well tum your teachers for help. Secondly, work out a detailed plan. Make sure it is easy and practical to carry out and you should reward you when goals achieving. Thirdly, moderate relaxation is a must, because all work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Last but not least, stick to your ideal, which serves as a compass, guiding and motivating you across tough times. Wish you good luck.

Answer 1

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【解析】朋友考試失敗，作者給朋友介紹了幾點(diǎn)戰(zhàn)勝困難實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的建議。

1. As—it.考查it用法。句中is known to us和后面的 that從句相連接是一個(gè)句子，不是非限制性定語從句。that從句是真正的主語，it作形式主語。故As—it.

2. smoothly—smooth.考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞journey用形容詞不用副詞，指順利的旅行，故smoothly—smooth.

3.刪除the.考查固定短語。lose heart “喪失信心”，是固定短語。之間不加冠詞。故刪除the.

4. figured—figure.考查虛擬語氣。此處suggest后加that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，用虛擬語氣。動(dòng)詞用（should）+動(dòng)詞原形，此處figure用原形。故figured—figure.

5. make—making.考查動(dòng)詞形式。動(dòng)詞avoid后加動(dòng)詞的-ing形式，此處指避免犯同樣的錯(cuò)，故make—making.

6.turn后加to.考查動(dòng)詞短語。turn to sb. for help “求助于某人”，turn后加介詞to再加賓語，故turn后加to.

7. you—yourself.考查反身代詞。句中主語和賓語都是you,賓語用反身代詞。此處指你應(yīng)該獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)你自己。故you—yourself.

8. achieving—achieved.考查過去分詞。句中goals和 achieve是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用過去分詞表被動(dòng)。指目標(biāo)被實(shí)現(xiàn)，故achieving—achieved.

9. make—makes.考查主謂一致。句中主語是all work and no play，指只工作不玩這種現(xiàn)象，是單數(shù)，謂語與之一致也用第三人稱單數(shù)，故make—makes.

10.across—through.考查介詞。across “橫過”,此處指度過艱難時(shí)期用through表示度過，故across—through.