Question

最近某高中擬開(kāi)展以“校園拒絕零食”為主題的活動(dòng)。假如你是該校學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，參考下面的內(nèi)容提示，給全校學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)。
內(nèi)容提示：1．描述吃零食的現(xiàn)象；
2．闡述吃零食的影響；
3．提出合理化的建議。
注意：   1．詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
2．參考詞匯：snacks零食；phenomenon現(xiàn)象。
Dear fellow students，
There is a serious phenomenon in our school．________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear fellow students.
There is a serious phenomenon in our school. We find many students will crowd in the school store to buy snacks after each class. Some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks is a bad habit and is also a waste of money. In addition，most snacks are unhealthy fond，for they contain too much fat and sugar. Eating snacks improperly may lead to fatness and illness. What is worse，some students throw the wrappers everywhere，which pollutes our campus.
Dear fellow students，we shouldn’t act like kids any more. We high school students should develop god habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are essential for us. Let’s form good eating habits and say no to snacks!

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