假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 \ 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意：

每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Tom,

I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago. Since I came to the new school, I had planned to write to you. Therefore, the busy life of the school spared me no time. After came to the school, I made up of my mind to study hard. To tell you the truth, that was Miss White, my new English teacher, who changed my mind. She suggested that I give in my bad habits. Although he is very strict with us, all the students fond of her.

I have to stop here. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

1.surprising—surprised

2.had--have

3.Therefore---However

4.came---coming

5.去掉of;

6.that—it

7.in—up

8.he---she

9.are ∧ fond

10.hear—hearing

【解析】

1. 考查形容詞。 本句使用surprised感到驚訝的，是由過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞，通常修飾人或者與人有關(guān)的事物。

2. 考查動詞的時態(tài)。前面的連詞是since，與現(xiàn)在完成時連用，故使用have

3. 考查連詞辨析上下文之間存在著轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故使用however。我原來計劃寫信給你，然而，忙碌的校園生活讓我抽不出時間。

4. 考查非謂語動詞。 介詞after后面要接動名詞doing的形式。

5. 考查固定搭配。make up one’s mind下定決心做某事。

6. 考查固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)。make up one’s mind下定決心做某事。

7. 考查固定短語。ive up放棄，本句是指放棄原有的壞習(xí)慣；give in屈服，讓步；這是一個不及物動詞短語，后面要接to…；形成give in to…向….屈服。

8. 考查代詞辨析  本句的主語是Miss White是一位女性，故使用she做主語

9.∧ fond 考查固定短語。be fond of喜歡…；本句在fond前面加are，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。

10.考查固定短語。look forward to期待著…；這里的to是介詞，后面要接動名詞形式

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯

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