Question

14．假設(shè)你是延川中學(xué)的高二學(xué)生李華，鑒于對本縣交通擁堵的見聞和感受．請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給相關(guān)部門領(lǐng)導(dǎo)寫一封信．
1．延川交通堵塞情況；
2．延川交通堵塞主要原因；   
     3．你的建議．
要求：1．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
      2．字?jǐn)?shù)控制在100詞左右．
Dear Sir，
I'm an 18-year-old student from Yanchuan Senior High School．                           
Best wishes!
Yours，
                                                                           Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作．要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略．但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采．審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述．還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing，some roads still remain unimproved，which surely lead to problems．隨著人口和汽車數(shù)量的增加，一些道路仍然沒有得到改善，這必導(dǎo)致一些問題．句中With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing是with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)在句中做狀語；which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語從句，which指代整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：In a word，I believe that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best．總之，我相信，如果我們努力改善我們的交通狀況．這是一個(gè)賓語從句，that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best做動詞believe的賓語．．

解答 Dear Sir，
    I'm an 18-year-old student from Yanchuan Senior High School．With the developing of the ecnomic，the traffic conditions in Yanchuan is becoming more and more worse，especially in the rush hour．People waste a lot of time in waiting for the bus or in their way home．With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing，some roads still remain unimproved，which will surely lead to problems．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）【現(xiàn)象及原因】
    It's time that the government took measures to improve the traffic conditiongs．In my view，first，government should broad the road to make more cars pass through．second，people should be encouraged to go by bus or bike instead of pravite cars，this will definitely reduce the air pollution as well．Third，people can go by subway in the rush hours．In a word，I believe that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）【建議】

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．