Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
With the development of modern technology, there are a plenty of ways for us to contact people. WeChat is probably our favorite, mainly because of its convenient. We can keep in contact with friends whenever it is and wherever we are as long as Wi-Fi is available. Another advantage is it is a relative cheap and quick way of communication. As messages get send and received instantly, the cost of making phone calls is cut down. Besides, music as well as pictures and videos are often downloaded through WeChat, but it is now a useful entertainment tool. However, problems exist at the meanwhile. For example, your identity can be easily revealed, so we should pay attention to protect our personal information.

Answer 1

【答案】①去掉plenty of前a
②convenient改為convenience
③advantage is 后加上that
④relative改為relatively
⑤send改為sent
⑥videos后are改為is
⑦but改為so/and
⑧at the meanwhile改為in the meanwhile
⑨your改為our
⑩protect改為protecting
【解析】①固定搭配：plenty of 足夠、大量，故去掉plenty of前a。
②because of后面跟名詞、代詞賓格和動名詞，故把convenient改為convenience。
③此處是that引導的表語從句，故在advantage is 后加上that，that引導表語從句不可省略。
④副詞修飾形容詞，根據(jù)句意可知把relative改為relatively。
⑤句意：信息立刻被發(fā)送和收到。根據(jù)句意可知，此處用過去分詞，get+過去分詞，故把send改為sent。
⑥music是句子主語，as well as pictures and videos是同位語，所以后面的謂語動詞與music保持一致，故把videos后are改為is。
⑦句意：音樂以及圖片和視頻往往是通過微信下載，并且它現(xiàn)在也是一個有用的娛樂工具。根據(jù)句意可知，此處表示因果或遞進關(guān)系，故把but改為so/and。
⑧固定詞組：in the meanwhile與此同時，故把at the meanwhile改為in the meanwhile。
⑨句意：我們的身份能很容易被透露。與上下文保持一致，故把your 改為our。
⑩固定結(jié)構(gòu)：pay attention to doing sth.故把protect改為protecting。