Question

18．假如你是李華，你校最近舉行了"中華傳統(tǒng)文化進(jìn)校園"活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖畫(huà)，給�？�"英語(yǔ)角"寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，介紹本次活動(dòng)．內(nèi)容如下：
1．活動(dòng)的目的：
2．活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；
3．活動(dòng)的收獲．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右：
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：書(shū)法calligraphy

Traditional Chinese Culture into the Campus
To promote the students'understanding of our traditional Chinese culture and arouse their interest and enthusiasm，our school recently launched a campaign，with the theme of"Traditional Chinese Culture into the Campus"
Various activities were organized，such as learning operas，paper cutting and Chinese calligraphy，attracting a wide range of participation of the students．Besides，an essay competition was held，where the students shared their own ideas and stories about the traditional culture．
The campaign turned out to be a great success，from which all the students benefited a lot．Not only do they take pride in being a Chinese，but they feel it their responsibility to preserve the traditional Chinese culture and spread it all over the world．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹"中華傳統(tǒng)文化進(jìn)校園"活動(dòng)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)表達(dá) 活動(dòng)的目的和過(guò)程；用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表達(dá)活動(dòng)的收獲．內(nèi)容包括：1．活動(dòng)的目的；2．活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；3．活動(dòng)的收獲．
高分句型：
1．Besides，an essay competition was held，where the students shared their own ideas and stories about the traditional culture句子里where 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞an essay competition，表示一個(gè)抽象的地點(diǎn)；the traditional culture表示"傳統(tǒng)文化"．
此外，還舉行了一個(gè)作文比賽，在這個(gè)比賽中，學(xué)生分享了他們自己關(guān)于傳統(tǒng)文化故事和觀點(diǎn)．
2．Not only do they take pride in being a Chinese，but they feel it their responsibility to preserve the traditional Chinese culture and spread it all over the world．本句中用了Not only…but also表示"不但…而且"，also可以省略，Not only 位于句首時(shí)，用倒裝do they take pride in being a Chinese； take pride in 表示"以…為驕傲"．
他們不僅以自己是一個(gè)中國(guó)人為傲，而且感到保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化，向全世界傳播傳統(tǒng)文化是他們的責(zé)任．

解答 Traditional Chinese Culture into the Campus
      To promote the students'understanding of our traditional Chinese culture and arouse their interest and enthusiasm，our school recently launched a campaign，with the theme of"Traditional Chinese Culture into the Campus"（活動(dòng)的目的）
      Various activities were organized，such as learning operas，paper cutting and Chinese calligraphy，attracting a wide range of participation of the students．Besides，an essay competition was held，where the students shared their own ideas and stories about the traditional culture．【高分句型一】（活動(dòng)的過(guò)程）
       The campaign turned out to be a great success，from which all the students benefited a lot．Not only do they take pride in being a Chinese，but they feel it their responsibility to preserve the traditional Chinese culture and spread it all over the world．【高分句型二】（活動(dòng)的收獲）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．
提綱類(lèi)英語(yǔ)作文具備以下特點(diǎn)：
1、題材涉及廣泛，如人物介紹、地點(diǎn)介紹、新聞報(bào)道、生活話題及社會(huì)熱門(mén)話題，試題設(shè)計(jì)真實(shí)性高，符合學(xué)生的認(rèn)知水平，其中學(xué)校生活類(lèi)題材占比例最大．體裁多種多樣，包括應(yīng)用文（書(shū)信、日記、通知、發(fā)言稿、尋物及招領(lǐng)啟事等）、說(shuō)明文、記敘文、議論文等．
2、提綱類(lèi)作文提示點(diǎn)一目了然，需要表達(dá)的信息一覽無(wú)余．答題時(shí)無(wú)須花過(guò)多的時(shí)間去揣摩寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)一般不會(huì)遺漏．
3、提綱類(lèi)作文中通常是以不完整的漢語(yǔ)句子（包括術(shù)語(yǔ)或概括性的短語(yǔ)）作為提示形式出現(xiàn)．這樣既能夠讓考生獲得命題人所要求的信息，又留給考生一定的發(fā)揮空間，因而要求考生具備很強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言駕馭能力和語(yǔ)篇整合能力．