Question

18．假如你叫李華．你的美國朋友Tom即將參加一個漢語演講比賽，他為此感到十分緊張．因此，他寫信向你咨詢?nèi)绾慰朔�賽前的緊張情緒．請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封回信：
（1）表示理解并給予安慰；
（2）給出建議并說明理由；
（3）表達(dá)祝愿．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右．
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：漢語演講比賽the Chinese Speech Contest
Dear Tom，
You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．
First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．
Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition！
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封安慰信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示理解并給予安慰；（2）給出建議并說明理由；（3）表達(dá)祝愿．
高分句型：
1．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．句子里What引導(dǎo)主語從句 you should keep in mind做從句的賓語；that引導(dǎo)表語從句 most people feel nervous like you
你應(yīng)該知道的是多數(shù)人都和你一樣緊張．
2．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．句子里用了比較級+比較級的結(jié)構(gòu)，表示"越來越"．
你對課程越熟悉，你就越不會緊張．

解答 Dear Tom，
      You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．【高分句型一】Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．（表示理解并給予安慰）
     First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．【高分句型二】Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．（給出建議并說明理由）
     Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition�。ū磉_(dá)祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
審題是否清楚是一篇書面表達(dá)成功與否的關(guān)鍵所在，在整個寫作過程中起著決定性作用．審好題會讓我們做到"磨刀不誤砍柴工"，審題時要做到以下幾點：
（1）審要求：書面表達(dá)試題一般都由"情景"和"要求"兩部分構(gòu)成．"情景"中包括所寫材料的目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等，一般在書面表達(dá)題的前半部分；而"要求"一般在書面表達(dá)的后半部分，以"注意"形式給出，實際上是對考生提出的要求．因而考生對于題目所提供的說明，應(yīng)認(rèn)真分析、反復(fù)推敲，搞清提出的內(nèi)容要求，抓住所要表達(dá)的信息點． （2）審文體：高考書面表達(dá)的體裁一般有三大類：記敘文、說明文和應(yīng)用文，具體形式有便條，日記，通知，書信，人物、事情、情景故事的描寫，看圖說話，縮寫，擴(kuò)寫，改寫等．審題時要審清文體，注意格式上的不同，避免出錯．
（3）審人稱：審查書面表達(dá)題干中隱含的讀者對象和撰寫人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由誰寫給誰"的．寫稿人是誰一般都已明確指出，給出形式假設(shè)環(huán)境中的"某人"，如"假設(shè)你是李華"，寫作時即用第一人稱"我"，即李華．而讀者對象有時沒有明示，要考生自己去進(jìn)行判斷．
（4）審時態(tài)：根據(jù)情景判斷短文需要的主體時態(tài)，即搞清楚要寫的是什么時候的事，過去的就用過去時．比如日記，是敘述過去發(fā)生的事情，自然用過去時；通知多用將來時．