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1．第二節(jié) 
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三的學(xué)生李華．請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹上周你被班級推薦參加學(xué)校英文書寫大賽的完整過程，并以"Our English Handwriting Contest"為題，給�？�"英語角"寫一篇英文稿件．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．

Our English Handwriting Contest
Last week we held an English handwriting contest in our school．
Two classmates and I were recommended to attend it on behalf of my class．For the whole week，I devoted myself to the practice after school．Taking my English teacher's advice，I paid special attention to writing certain letters and the way I held my pen．On Friday，about 50 students from different classes，including me，took part in the contest．Every one of us tried hard．When it was announced that I won the first prize，I was very happy and proud．
Beautiful handwriting makes both reading and writing a pleasure，which is of great importance to us students．I will continue practicing it．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，從圖畫中看出反映的問題，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Taking my English teacher's advice，I paid special attention to writing certain letters and the way I held my pen．采納了我的英語老師的意見，我特別注意寫一些信和我拿筆的方式．本句中用現(xiàn)在分詞Taking my English teacher's advice在句中做狀語； I held my pen．是一個定語從句，修飾先行詞the way，在從句中做方式狀語，所以省略的that．the way 做先行詞在定語從句中做狀語時(shí)，關(guān)系詞可以用that，in which 或者省略．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：Beautiful handwriting makes both reading and writing a pleasure，which is of great importance to us students．漂亮的書法使閱讀和寫作成為一種樂趣，這對我們學(xué)生很重要．這是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前邊整個句子的意思．

解答 Our English Handwriting Contest
   Last week we held an English handwriting contest in our school．
  Two classmates and I were recommended to attend it on behalf of my class．For the whole week，I devoted myself to the practice after school．Taking my English teacher's advice，I paid special attention to writing certain letters and the way I held my pen．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）On Friday，about 50 students from different classes，including me，took part in the contest．Every one of us tried hard．When it was announced that I won the first prize，I was very happy and proud．
     Beautiful handwriting makes both reading and writing a pleasure，which is of great importance to us students．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）I will continue practicing it．

點(diǎn)評 看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來提供目的、對象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等場景，要求作者借助圖畫，通過聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式，用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容，從寫作體裁上看，可說明介紹，可敘事記人，可寫景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論．看圖作文主要考查學(xué)生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語言表達(dá)能力．