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有些同學(xué)在家中是父母的好孩子，可是在學(xué)校里顯得“格格不入”。事實(shí)上，只要你能夠尊師敬友，熱心助人，態(tài)度端正，遵紀(jì)守規(guī)，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，善于聆聽，你也會(huì)成為老師和同學(xué)眼中的好學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你以“I will be a popular star in school life!”為題，結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文，談?wù)勛约旱淖龇�。短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人的相關(guān)信息。

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One possible version:
I will be a popular star in school life!
Most students want to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal. How to be a popular student? In fact, it is very simple.
At first, a good student not only respects teachers but also is friendly to classmates. It's also important to be good listeners. In this way, people would like to talk with us about their problems.A good student should follow the school’s rules. What's more, we should be helpful, and always try to help people who are in trouble. It's necessary to be active and warm-hearted. Of course, as a student, we should work hard and try to get good marks. There is no doubt that we should smile often.
I will take the principles above to realize my dream---to be a popular star in my school.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，短文標(biāo)題與寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫一篇英文短文。由于題干給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)潔，所以需要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。題目中的要點(diǎn)都要提到，缺一不可。注意要結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，談?wù)勛约旱淖龇�，短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人的相關(guān)信息。另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要寫得太多，更不能太少。盡量避免使用生僻詞匯，在正確使用簡(jiǎn)單句的同時(shí)，要努力使用復(fù)合句，提升作文檔次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。