Question

假設你是李華，你的英國同學Emily來信讓你建議在中國云南旅游的一些必到之處。請根據以下提示給Emily寫封建議信，要點包括：
1.可到麗江小鎮(zhèn)。這里海拔約2500米，在這里體驗納西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的戶外酒吧(bar)。
2.再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）這里每年都吸引數以百萬計的游客。
3.再到昆明游覽云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接觸多種不同的少數民族文化（minority cultures）。
要求：1.必須包括以上要點，可適當補充 2.詞數120左右
Dear Emily，
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Emily，
Glad to hear from you. You have asked me for my advice on travelling in Yunnan. It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.
To begin with, I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters. Not only can you experience Naxi culture but also you can see different styles of outdoor bars.  Besides, it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. It is filled with world-class sights and sceneries, which draws millions of tourists every year. Moreover, having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice. You can get in touch with a variety of minority cultures of China.
I hope you will have a good time travelling. I am looking forward to hearing from you and can hardly wait to share your joy of the trip.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一篇應用文。讓學生寫書信是高考中，常見的題材形式。學生感到很熟悉。成文時應該注意以下幾點：1.書信內容要齊全。（1）可到麗江小鎮(zhèn)。這里海拔約2500米，在這里體驗納西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的戶外酒吧(bar)。（2）再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）這里每年都吸引數以百萬計的游客。（3）再到昆明游覽云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接觸多種不同的少數民族文化（minority cultures）。2.人稱：第一人稱；3.時態(tài)：一般現在時；4.適當使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當使用連詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。
【亮點說明】文章使用了從句：I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters.  it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. 高級句型：not only。。。but also。。。 非謂語動詞短語：having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice.   It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions. 短語：looking forward to；have a good time；get in touch with；pay a visit to；hear from；插入語及連詞的使用：To begin with, Besides, Moreover。