Question

12．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信說(shuō)，他因父親工作變動(dòng)剛轉(zhuǎn)到一個(gè)新學(xué)校，很難融入新的集體，為此感到很苦惱．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封信．
要點(diǎn)：1．幫他分析原因；
 2．給他提出建議．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；
 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
 3．開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Tom，
I'm writing in response to the trouble you have                                 
Best regards!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，用英語(yǔ)寫一封信．要點(diǎn)包括：1．分析原因；2．提出建議，3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：in response to （響應(yīng)，回答，反應(yīng)）；in bad mood（心情不好）；adapt to （適應(yīng)）；communicate with sb （與某人交流）；join in （加入）；what's more（而且）；warm-hearted （熱心的）；make friends with sb（與某人交朋友）
高分句型：1．It may take you a period of time to adapt yourself to it．
                    it在句中作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式短語(yǔ)to adapt yourself to it．
                   2．Only by doing this can you get to know more people．
                    副詞only位于句首，句子用到裝．
                   3．What's more，①it may also be a good idea to help others if possible，②which can show them you are warm-hearted and friendly．
                    ①it做句子的形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是不定式短語(yǔ) to help others；②which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代上一句提到的事情．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm writing in response to the trouble you have getting along with your new classmates．Don't be in bad mood．For a newcomer，it's really hard to start a new life．It may take you a period of time to adapt yourself to it（高分句型一）．
However，you have to face it．It will be helpful to communicate with your classmates voluntarily and join in some social activities．Only by doing this can you get to know more people（高分句型二）．What's more，it may also be a good idea to help others if possible，which can show them you are warm-hearted and friendly（高分句型三）．
With time going on，I'm sure your classmates will know you better and like to make friends with you．
Best regards!
                                                    Yours，
                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫對(duì)，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．