Question

假設(shè)你叫李華,自從上了高中后，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己不是很適應(yīng)高中的學(xué)習(xí)生活，現(xiàn)在就目前的情況，給自己初中時(shí)最信賴的李老師寫一封求助信。
1. 高中生活基本情況：
① 學(xué)科比初中多(9門功課)。② 每天作業(yè)時(shí)間3-4小時(shí)，課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間很少。③ 睡眠時(shí)間不足，上課有時(shí)感到疲勞。 ④ 考試壓力大，家長期望高。
2. 你目前遇到的最大的問題以及現(xiàn)在的感受。
注意：1．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)：100左右。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．參考詞匯：課外活動(dòng)：activities after class 壓力 ：pressure  家長期望高 ：high expectations from parents
Dear Mr. Li ,
This is Li Hua. Remember me? How are you now? I need your help because I find I’m not very used to the high middle school life.
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Yours sincerely                    
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Li,
This is Li Hua. Remember me? How are you now? I need your help because I find I’m not very used to the high middle school life.
We have nine subjects in all. Every day I have to spend at least three to four hours doing my homework, so there is little time left for activities after class. I hardly have any time to do what I want to. Besides, I sometimes feel sleepy in class because I don’t have enough sleep. The great pressure of exams and the high expectations from my parents often make me even more tired．
The biggest problem I meet now is my maths study, which is much more difficult than that in junior middle school. I don’t know how to improve it. So I hope I could get some advice from you.
All the best.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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