Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周參與以“Building a Civilized City District”為主題的班級(jí)活動(dòng)的全過程。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。 提示詞：敬老院 geracomium

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, we took part in a series of activities with the theme of building a civilized city district, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.

To make our work more effective, in Monday’s class meeting, we discussed heatedly and at last agreed to do some specific things for the nearby community. Considering a bus stop as a window of city civilization, after school we volunteered to be guides leading the passengers patiently to wait in line to get on bus. To our delight, a lot of people got to know the importance of civilized behavior and the traffic went much smoother than usual. Respecting the elderly is a Chinese traditional virtue and a symbol of civilization as well. So on Wednesday afternoon, we went to accompany the old people in Pingguoyuan Geracomium and some students even made some specialty dishes for them. The bright smiles on the faces of the elderly are the biggest reward for our efforts

Then came the experience sharing meeting, when I was honored to make a report on behalf of my class. I feel proud to do my bit for the society and believe that small efforts made by everyone can help build a more civilized city district.

【解析】

本文書面表達(dá)屬于看圖作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一篇看圖作文：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周參與以“Building a Civilized City District”為主題的班級(jí)活動(dòng)的全過程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：took part in a series of activities（參加一系列的活動(dòng)）；To make our work more effective（為了使工作更有效）；the importance of civilized behavior and the traffic（文明行為和交通的重要性）；help build a more civilized city district.（幫助建設(shè)更加文明的城區(qū)）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。