Question

10．假定你是李華，正在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)．你計(jì)劃寒假期間在當(dāng)?shù)芈眯校��?qǐng)寫一封e-mail向旅行社詢問(wèn)相關(guān)的旅行信息．要點(diǎn)如下：
 1．旅行信息（如景點(diǎn)等）；
 2．當(dāng)?shù)靥厣�（如食品等）�?br />  3．注意事項(xiàng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
  2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in New Zealand．I'm writing to 
                                                    
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these．正如我們知道的，新西蘭以其漂亮的景色和名勝古跡而聞名，我想了解更多關(guān)于它的事．
高分句型二：
Besides，I am also interested in the local food there．除此以外，我也對(duì)當(dāng)?shù)氐拿朗澈芨信d趣．
句型一 ①As we know 該句是由as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，as 替代后面整個(gè)句子的內(nèi)容
            ②New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery…謂語(yǔ)部分使用了重要短語(yǔ)be famous fou 因..而聞名
句型二  I am also interested in the local food there．該句的謂語(yǔ)部分使用了固定短語(yǔ) be interested in 對(duì)..感興趣

解答 Dear Sir and Madam，
    I am Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Zealand．I am writing to ask for information about your agency's New Zealand's travel for the winter vacation．（說(shuō)明原因）
   My friend and I plan to travel in the country．Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these．（高分句型一）Besides，I am also interested in the local food there．（高分句型二）How much do I have to pay for the travel？At length，are there other things I should be aware of？
   I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience．（提出期望）
   Sincerely Yours，
   Li Hua

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