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你班同學(xué)舉行辯論，主題是Environment or Economy, must we choose?請(qǐng)將辯論情況向英語報(bào)投稿，并發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

For environment	For economy	Your ideas
1動(dòng)植物死亡，魚甚至沒時(shí)間產(chǎn)卵。 2．水、空氣污染，致人生病 3，人口不斷增長，需要更多食物和土地	人比動(dòng)植物更重要 很多企業(yè)關(guān)心環(huán)境并且負(fù)責(zé)任的 經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展將創(chuàng)造更多的就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)	至少兩句

要求；1.150字左右,句首已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)2．語言連貫，不可照譯。3.使用過渡語

Dear editor,

Recently our classmates have had a heated discussion about the topic “Environment or economy, must we choose?”. Some students are in favor of the development of environment, while others put economy above environment.

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Answer 1

Dear editor,

Recently our classmates have had a heated discussion about the topic “Environment or economy, must we choose?” .Some students are in favor of the development of environment, while others put economy above environment.

The students who are worried about the environment say that many plants and animals have died and fish are even given no time to lay eggs. Besides, water and air are seriously polluted, making people sick. While we damage our environment, we keep producing more and more people who need more land to live on and more food to eat.

As to the students for economy, they propose , first of all, people are more important than plants and animals. As a matter of fact, many companies and factories are very concerned about the environment and have sense of responsibility. In addition, with the development of economy, more jobs will be created.

選擇其中三點(diǎn)(In my opinion, I think, firstly, we should produce more things from recycled materials, and less from materials taken directly from nature. Secondly, more effective laws to preserve the environment should be made, which controls the scale of trees-cutting and fish-catching. Thirdly, we try to live an environmentally friendly way of life and pay slightly higher prices for things that are environmentally friendly. what’s more, companies producing chemical waste should pay higher taxes. With these measures, I believe that a healthy environment and a stable economy should be possible at the same time.)

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試題分析：

本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是Environment or Economy，給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，就是對(duì)環(huán)境和經(jīng)濟(jì)的不同觀點(diǎn)，要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為環(huán)境更重要的觀點(diǎn)，然后是認(rèn)為經(jīng)濟(jì)更重要的觀點(diǎn)，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。

本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的比較全，只需要考生表達(dá)清楚，還有自己的觀點(diǎn)。在寫作的時(shí)候要適合合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

文中運(yùn)用了多種語法知識(shí)，如賓語從句say that many plants and animals have died；一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)被動(dòng)語態(tài)water and air are seriously polluted，現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語making people sick.；定語從句more and more people who need more 等，體現(xiàn)了作者豐富的語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)功底。

文中運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài)，時(shí)態(tài)選用得當(dāng)，并保持了整體時(shí)態(tài)一致。

文中運(yùn)用in favor of、be concerned about、have sense of等詞組，使文中內(nèi)容更加更富。

文中運(yùn)用while、what’s more等連詞，使文中內(nèi)容更加連貫，條例清晰。

考點(diǎn)：考查正反方觀點(diǎn)作文寫作