Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的日本筆友Amanda得知中國的新冠狀病毒疫情嚴(yán)重，你也在家學(xué)習(xí)備戰(zhàn)高考，因此

她在二月初寫信鼓勵你，給你加油打氣，并給你寄了一些口罩，請你寫一封感謝的回信。內(nèi)容包括：

1 .感謝她的鼓勵和幫助；

2. 分享在家隔離的感受和平時的衛(wèi)生注意事項(xiàng)

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Amanda,

How is everything going？

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Amanda,

How is everything going？I am eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your encouragement and face masks.

In order to prevent and control the Novel Coronavirus, the students in China have to study at home on computers instead of going to school. As a senior three student, I am engaged in preparing my college entrance examination. Although I am worried about the serious epidemic, it is your encouragement that reminds me study is my priority. Besides, I have a balanced diet and always keep my body clean, which guarantees me a healthy body. It is believed that we will beat the Novel Coronavirus soon.

Thanks again for your generous help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，表達(dá)對朋友的感謝以及告知在家學(xué)習(xí)的相關(guān)情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)感謝

2.告知相關(guān)情況

1）介紹學(xué)習(xí)模式。（introduction to the study model）

2）自身的感受。（feelings）

3) 如何保持良好的身體。（how to keep a healthy body）

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be eagerly to; heartfelt gratitude; In order to; instead of; be engaged in; remind; priority; a balanced diet; guarantee;

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you.

2. In order to prevent and control of the epidemic.

3. The students in China have to study at home on computers instead of going to school.

4. I am engaged in preparing my college entrance examination.

5. Study is my priority.

6. I have a balanced diet 7. Looking forward to your early reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result .

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改