Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，用英文簡要描寫你的一位好朋友周亮。

1．  年齡16歲，身材不高，但很聰明；

2．  興趣廣泛，愛好足球、音樂、上網(wǎng)等；

3．  學(xué)習(xí)勤奮, 待人謙虛( modest )，樂于助人，耐心幫你學(xué)英語；

4．  大家都很喜歡他，你也喜歡他。

注意：1. 詞數(shù): 100 詞左右;

2. 題目: My Best Friend

My Best Friend

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My Best Friend

Zhou Liang ,who is 16, is my best friend. He is not very tall, but he is very smart.

He has many different interests. He is not only fond of music but also sports. He is a member of our school football team. Surfing the Internet is his favorite, too. He works so hard at his lessons that he does well in all the subjects. He is modest and ready to help others. He always helps me with my English patiently. With his help, I have made much progress and caught up with my classmates.

Everyone in my class likes Zhou Liang, so do I.

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