【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。（10分）
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在下面寫出修改后的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Sally,
Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.
What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Bing

【答案】①of which I worked like a guide... 將 of 改為 in。

②of which I worked like a guide... 將 like 改為 as。

③The work was interesting but tired.. 將 tired 改為 tiring。

④It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. 將 have 改為 had。

⑤ support for the family. 把 for 去掉。

⑥keep on ask them for money... 將 ask 改為 asking。

⑦ share worry with my parent. 將 parent 改為 parents。

⑧What's worse... 將 worse 改為 more。

⑨something can' t be learnt from... 在 something 和 can't 之間加 that。

⑩In the word... 將 the 改為 a。


【解析】①從句后面說的是“worked as a guide in a travel agency”，意思是我在一家旅行社作為一名導(dǎo)游。in which 相當(dāng)于where ,修飾后面的a travel agency。故將of 改成in

②這句話是說我作為一名導(dǎo)游在一家旅行社工作。work as作為固定搭配，意為“做……的工作”。故將like改為as

③句子中的主語是“The work”，工作是物，形容詞要用“令人……”，結(jié)合前面的interesting可以得知。這里應(yīng)該是“令人疲憊的”。故填tiring

④這句話是說這是我自己第一次掙到錢。由前面的was可以得知，整個(gè)句子都表示過去發(fā)生的事情，因此情態(tài)動(dòng)詞要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故將have變?yōu)閔ad

⑤support直接與動(dòng)詞連用，后面不需要加任何介詞。所以支撐家庭只需要用support 就可以了 故去掉for

⑥“keep on”是“繼續(xù)、保持”意思，keep on+doing sth.意為一直做某事，on是介詞，后面是V-ing。故將ask改成asking

⑦句意為與我的父母分享擔(dān)憂。Parents作為父母的意思時(shí)，不可用單數(shù)形式。故將parent改為parents

⑧what's more作為一個(gè)固定搭配，意為“還有，就是”，符合句意

⑨something不可與情態(tài)動(dòng)詞直接連接使用，要用that引導(dǎo)的從句，此時(shí)that指代前面的something

⑩這句話意思是說總之我有一個(gè)很贊的暑假。In a word 是固定搭配，意為“總而言之”。故將the改為a

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