Question

20．假如你是值日班長(zhǎng)，你要在班會(huì)課上做個(gè)發(fā)言，主題是別害怕失�。�
發(fā)言?xún)?nèi)容包括：
（1）對(duì)待失敗不同的態(tài)度；
（2）自己的失敗經(jīng)歷；
（3）你的建議．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Hello，everyone．Today my speech is never to be afraid of failure in life． 
As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）Some successful people can constantly get precious lessons from failure．However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
Failure sometimes is more valuable than success．I still remember the experience of learning swimming last summer．I used to be terrified of water．With the encouragement of my coach，I made it at last，despite failing many times．The experience makes me learn something new about myself．
In a word，failure is not horrible．If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息在班會(huì)課上做個(gè)發(fā)言，主題是別害怕失敗，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）對(duì)待失敗不同的態(tài)度；（2）自己的失敗經(jīng)歷；（3）你的建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：as we all know  眾所周知；meet with  遇到；遭遇；be more than  大于，多于；be terrified of  害怕…
As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）
 However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everyone．Today my speech is never to be afraid in life．
     As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）Some successful people can constantly get precious lessons from failure．However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
     Failure sometimes is more valuable than success．I still remember the experience of learning swimming last summer．I used to be terrified of water．With the encouragement of my coach，I made it at last，despite failing many times．The experience makes me learn something new about myself．
     In a word，failure is not horrible．If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）
     That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．