Question

19．假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter近期打算來中國，他對中國的鄉(xiāng)村生活很感興趣．你打算邀請他去體驗一下你家鄉(xiāng)的"農家樂"．請用英語寫封信向他推薦，要點如下：
1．"農家樂"興起的原因；
2．"農家樂"的服務特色．
注意：1．詞數(shù)110左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：農家樂 agritainment
Dear Peter，
It's great to learn that you're coming to China to experience the country life．The"agritainment"，a kind of farm-based tourism，is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival．（高分句型一）
As more people from cities are fed up with crowds，noise and traffic jams，they're trying hard to get closer to nature．（高分句型二）However，few people can afford a long holiday in terms of time and money．As a result，"agritainment"catches on，which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment．If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views，but some hands-on activities as well．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will have a pleasant stay in my hometown．
Looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息和圖表說明來介紹小區(qū)的具體情況．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照方位順序進行介紹．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)． 4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構．比如It's great to learn that you're coming to China to experience the country life．是it作形式主語．If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views．是if引導的條件狀語從句，還有非限制性定語從句As a result，"agritainment"catches on，which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment．狀語As a result的使用使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫．
The"agritainment"，a kind of farm-based tourism，is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival．（高分句型一）
As more people from cities are fed up with crowds，noise and traffic jams，they're trying hard to get closer to nature．（高分句型二）
If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views，but some hands-on activities as well．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      It's great to learn that you're coming to China to experience the country life．The"agritainment"，a kind of farm-based tourism，is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival．（高分句型一）
      As more people from cities are fed up with crowds，noise and traffic jams，they're trying hard to get closer to nature．（高分句型二）However，few people can afford a long holiday in terms of time and money．As a result，"agritainment"catches on，which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment．If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views，but some hands-on activities as well．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will have a pleasant stay in my hometown．
       Looking forward to your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．