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3．假設(shè)你是李華，你上周剛剛參加了你校舉辦的第十屆英語演講比賽，并從三十名選手中脫穎而出，榮獲"十佳獎"．在準(zhǔn)備參賽期間，你的外教Mr．Craige對你提供了很多指導(dǎo)和幫助．現(xiàn)請你用英語給他寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．獲獎情況及感受；
2．回顧準(zhǔn)備過程；
3．感謝他的幫助；
4．邀他來家做客．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
提示：十佳獎：Top Ten Prize  選手：competitor
Dear Mr．Craige，I'm willing to tell you something about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school．
I got the"Top Ten Prize"out of 30 competitors，which was totally beyond my imagination．（高分句型一）When I heard the final result，I couldn't believe my ears and jumped with joy．
It's because of your effort that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English．（高分句型二）Before the contest，whenever you had free time，you would help me practice my spoken English．Besides，you communicated with me as much as possible，and corrected my pronunciation，intonation as well．What's more，you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence．Without your help，I wouldn't have achieved such a good result．（高分句型三）Also，I have benefited a lot from this competition．All in all，I really appreciate your help．
Thank you again for your advice and kind help．I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李華，你上周剛剛參加了你校舉辦的第十屆英語演講比賽，并從三十名選手中脫穎而出，榮獲"十佳獎"．在準(zhǔn)備參賽期間，你的外教Mr．Craige對你提供了很多指導(dǎo)和幫助．現(xiàn)請你用英語給他寫一封感謝信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：獲獎情況及感受；．回顧準(zhǔn)備過程；感謝他的幫助；邀他來家做客．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：beyond one's imagination 超乎想象make rapid progress 取得快速進(jìn)步achieve a good result 取得一個好成績benefit from…從…中受益all in all 總而言之have a good time 玩得開心
 I got the"Top Ten Prize"out of 30 competitors，which was totally beyond my imagination．（高分句型一）
It's because of your effort that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English．（高分句型二）
Without your help，I wouldn't have achieved such a good result．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Craige，
      I'm willing to tell you something about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school．
      I got the"Top Ten Prize"out of 30 competitors，which was totally beyond my imagination．（高分句型一）When I heard the final result，I couldn't believe my ears and jumped with joy．
      It's because of your effort that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English．（高分句型二）Before the contest，whenever you had free time，you would help me practice my spoken English．Besides，you communicated with me as much as possible，and corrected my pronunciation，intonation as well．What's more，you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence．Without your help，I wouldn't have achieved such a good result．（高分句型三）Also，I have benefited a lot from this competition．All in all，I really appreciate your help．
      Thank you again for your advice and kind help．I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．