Question

12．假如你是李華，你的筆友Jane最近總是感覺身體不適，因此寫信向你詢問如何保持身體健康，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示用英文給她寫一封建議信．
要點提示：
告訴她：健康對我們每個人來說都是最為重要的．為了保持健康，我們需要一些知識．
1．首先，注意我們的飲食．我們應(yīng)該吃大量的水果和蔬菜，因為它們富含纖維素并且脂肪      含量較低．因此水果和蔬菜對健康有益．不要吃太多富合脂肪的食物，不要喝太多的咖啡．
2．其次，鍛煉是必需的；經(jīng)常性的鍛煉能使我們保持身材；
3．最后，養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣．早睡早起，不熬夜、不吸煙、不喝酒．
字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給但不計入總數(shù)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)）．
Dear Jane，
I'm glad to receive your letter．But at the same time，I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days．
                                                      
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封如何保持身體健康的書信．根據(jù)要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信主題，強(qiáng)調(diào)健康的重要性；二保持健康的建議；三希望建議對他有用．
高分句型：
1．Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat，such as butter．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)定語從句contains too much fat，代指先行詞a lot of food；contains 表示"包含，包括"．
不要吃含有太多脂肪是食物，例如黃油．
2．Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat．句子里keep from 表示"遠(yuǎn)離"．
經(jīng)常鍛煉有助于我們遠(yuǎn)離肥胖．

解答 Dear Jane，
       I'm glad to receive your letter．But at the same time，I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days．Health is the most important for us．In order to stay healthy，we need know some common knowledge．（點明書信主題，強(qiáng)調(diào)健康的重要性）
       Firstly，We'd better pay attention to the diet．We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables，because they are rich in fiber and low in fat．So fruit and vegetables are good for health．Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat，such as butter．【高分句型一】Don't drink too much coffee，either．Secondly，doing exercise is necessary．Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat．【高分句型二】Finally，You should form good living habits．We should go to bed early and get up early．What's more，Don't stay up．Don't smoke and drink any more．（保持健康的建議）
       These are my suggestions．I hope you find them useful for you．Hope you will be healthier．（希望建議對他有用）
       Best wishes!                                                                       
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li  Hua 

點評 考查提綱類作文．在體裁明確、中心突出、要點清晰的前提下，應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達(dá)出來．表達(dá)時應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語表達(dá)出來，力求做到語言準(zhǔn)確無誤．