Question

2月4日，星期天上午，你們班同學(xué)騎車到學(xué)校附近的公園組織了一次環(huán)�；顒�(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇日記，發(fā)表你對(duì)此次活動(dòng)的看法。

1組	掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物
2組	宣傳：樹立標(biāo)牌，告訴游客要愛護(hù)花木
3組	演講：向游客宣傳“白色污染”的害處以及保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性
你的看法	……

注意：
1．日記必須包括表內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
2．日記格式及首句已給出，不列入總詞數(shù)；
3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。  4．參考詞匯：煙蒂cigarette end   標(biāo)牌 board
February 4, Sunday                                                  Fine
This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park.
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Answer 1

February 4, Sunday                                           Fine
This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish ,such as the waste paper ,cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.
I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people’s health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.

解析試題分析：本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的日記，審題時(shí)注意本文使用過去時(shí)，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，只需要翻譯即可，可以分開寫三組的不同活動(dòng)。在個(gè)人看法的時(shí)候要明確要加強(qiáng)對(duì)人們環(huán)保理念的教育，提高人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)，政府在這方面要加強(qiáng)力度。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于日記，也是提綱類短文的一種，文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把三組人的行動(dòng)都描述出來，形成一個(gè)整體。選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。