【題目】音樂(lè)在我們生活中起著重要的作用，生活中不能缺少音樂(lè)。音樂(lè)可以幫助我們調(diào)節(jié)情緒，緊張的時(shí)候可以使我們輕松，憂傷的時(shí)候可以使我們快樂(lè)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，談?wù)勔魳?lè)的重要性，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

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【答案】Music is playing an important part in our life. Most of us are fond of music and listen to music regularly. I attach great importance to music. To start with，when I feel sad，music can comfort me，then I can feel more confident about life and my problems. Also，when I have too much press with my school work，music can make me feel relaxed. In addition，when I have some difficulty with sleep，some soft music can help me fall asleep easily. Finally，when I am in a state of worry，music can calm me down and make me feel optimistic. All in all，music is so important that life is a journey through a desert if there is no music in our life.

【解析】這是一篇議論文。文章內(nèi)容提示已經(jīng)給出。同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。2. 要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。3.

行文思路要有邏輯性，在中心論點(diǎn)給出后要由淺入深，做到力求全面。該文寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)主要是如何更好的敘述這三點(diǎn)。因?yàn)樗锌忌拇笾聝?nèi)容都是一樣的所以主要是看能不能寫(xiě)出讓考官眼前一亮 的作文。同時(shí)要使文章的內(nèi)容充實(shí)，不能顯得無(wú)力。學(xué)生可以采用簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)雜句結(jié)合的方法，并且同時(shí)穿插一些祈使句和倒裝句使文章充實(shí)。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

文章開(kāi)篇給出了全文的中心論點(diǎn)Music is playing an important part in our life.言簡(jiǎn)意賅，主旨鮮明。先從一般人寫(xiě)起，再寫(xiě)到自己，音樂(lè)給自己帶來(lái)了什么，對(duì)自己有什么幫助都詳細(xì)貼切的寫(xiě)了出來(lái)從而更呼應(yīng)了文章的主旨句。最后用All in all總結(jié)首尾呼應(yīng)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文中還用了are fond of，attach great importance to，in a state of等高級(jí)短語(yǔ)讓文章看起來(lái)更有料，To start with等連接詞使行文非常流暢。特別是文章結(jié)尾最后一句內(nèi)容讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。

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